Computer Trouble

We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
· An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
· Reasons for our opinion,
· An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.

Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion everybody should have their own computers so that children don’t have fights with their big sisters or brothers. Or if that doesn’t work it should be youngest to oldest. The oldest goes at night because they go to bed later and also the younger kids would get more time to do their homework. So I think everyone should have their own computer or go youngest to oldest.